First pass editing is almost complete on this new book. I'm happy with where it is going, sharpening up the dialog and looking closely at the action to make sure it's flowing.
Classroom discipline is something that has been dear to the hearts of many bringing back strong feelings. In 'Teaching Teachers' the strap and can are not spared.
A Small Sample
Scene. Ms Dupree has had her class interrupted by two girls running down the corridor and shouting. She finds them in Mr Hughes class where she administers discipline. Mr Huges finds he admires the sight of Monica and her strap.
Ms Dupree nodded slowly, "You two! Hands up!" She pointed her strap at the two late comers who were looking terrified now.
Slowly the two girls raised their left hands then supported them with their right. Ms Dupree walked in front of the first, flicked her strap out so it landed into the upheld palm, stepped back slightly, pulled the strap back then flicked it over her shoulder.
When her left hand went behind her back and gripped the tails he noticed something for the first time. With her breasts jutting out provocatively from her sheer top, her knees slightly bent and the stockings leading up to her short skirt, she looked erotic-hot. This was damnably erotic watching her give a strapping!
Monica strained for a moment as she pulled the strap between her hands and then with a tug the strap swished through the air to crack down on the unlucky palm bringing a scream to the unfortunate recipient’s throat that could not be contained. "Change hands," was the terse command.
The stroke was repeated so that the girl now had two enormously throbbing palms leaving her visibly shaken by the power of the strap slamming into her soft palms. The other girl was then to have her turn with Ms Dupree standing in front of her measuring the distance. Then the strap was withdrawn, flicked over the shoulder, its tails gripped then brought down with yet another sharp and mighty crack. Similarly the other hand was strapped so that now both girls stood shaking their stinging hands and looking distressed.
Then the ominous word from Ms Dupree, "Again," brought sobs, "Please no Ms Dupree. Please," they pleaded in unison but in vain.
Ah, classroom discipline. How times have changed.
In 'Teaching Teachers' you'll find a new slant on olden day discipline but that's not all. Here some of the teachers take a little old fashioned discipline also.
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'Trikki